cover: good image which shows the college in a good way. colours are consistent with the text and logo contents:good image which relates to the one on the cover, brief summary of each page is attention grabbing. page numbers dont make sense
cover: good image which shows the college in a good way. colours are consistent with the text and logo contents:good image which relates to the one on the cover, brief summary of each page is attention grabbing. page numbers dont make sense
You used very pretty girls on your front cover and contents page which shows leyton has sexy people :))) i like how you used, the colours from the leyton's logo as your fonts, because these colours are vibrant and eye-catching. The layout is good, because you put the text around the models to show their face. Overall well done :D
Front cover: I like how you blurred a bit of the image, it looks aesthetically better. I like how you made the "A" big and bold, it's very eye catching. and I like how you used different colours for the text. Contents Page: I like the images of the social networks, its vivid and pops out. What you could of done to improve your contents page was not add the LSC logo because you already have it on your front cover.
Your cover page has a nice image and the colours stand out well on it. You could improve it if you had written the masthead so it is more clear. Your contents page look very colourful and shows social media websites it would be available on. You could improve it if the image had the person's face rather than the back of their head.
It is very original how you used the real background to keep it realistic. The colours were used very well as it appeals more and catches the reader's eye. You also used the colours to match the logo. You included the social networks which are important to get more information.
Your front page and contents page both show a clear understanding of convention and developing technical skills (be careful about colour schemes, general mise en scene and masthead placement). You need to fully evaluate your work taking others comments into consideration and outlining 3 skills you would like to develop in making your music mag.
Your front page and contents page both show a clear understanding of convention and developing technical skills (be careful about colour schemes, general mise en scene and masthead placement). You need to fully evaluate your work taking others comments into consideration and outlining 3 skills you would like to develop in making your music mag.
cover: good image which shows the college in a good way. colours are consistent with the text and logo
ReplyDeletecontents:good image which relates to the one on the cover, brief summary of each page is attention grabbing. page numbers dont make sense
cover: good image which shows the college in a good way. colours are consistent with the text and logo
ReplyDeletecontents:good image which relates to the one on the cover, brief summary of each page is attention grabbing. page numbers dont make sense
You used very pretty girls on your front cover and contents page which shows leyton has sexy people :)))
ReplyDeletei like how you used, the colours from the leyton's logo as your fonts, because these colours are vibrant and eye-catching. The layout is good, because you put the text around the models to show their face. Overall well done :D
Front cover: I like how you blurred a bit of the image, it looks aesthetically better. I like how you made the "A" big and bold, it's very eye catching. and I like how you used different colours for the text.
ReplyDeleteContents Page: I like the images of the social networks, its vivid and pops out.
What you could of done to improve your contents page was not add the LSC logo because you already have it on your front cover.
Your cover page has a nice image and the colours stand out well on it. You could improve it if you had written the masthead so it is more clear. Your contents page look very colourful and shows social media websites it would be available on. You could improve it if the image had the person's face rather than the back of their head.
ReplyDeleteIt is very original how you used the real background to keep it realistic. The colours were used very well as it appeals more and catches the reader's eye. You also used the colours to match the logo. You included the social networks which are important to get more information.
ReplyDeleteYour front page and contents page both show a clear understanding of convention and developing technical skills (be careful about colour schemes, general mise en scene and masthead placement). You need to fully evaluate your work taking others comments into consideration and outlining 3 skills you would like to develop in making your music mag.
ReplyDeleteYour front page and contents page both show a clear understanding of convention and developing technical skills (be careful about colour schemes, general mise en scene and masthead placement). You need to fully evaluate your work taking others comments into consideration and outlining 3 skills you would like to develop in making your music mag.
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